Monday 1 October 2012

rap

Heres a made up Ice Cream rap...
"Mum I need a quid coz the ice cream man has appeared, he’s got toffee I love toffee and it comes with a really frothy coffee! Maybe you can have some, maybe you can have some. Oh no he’s leaving hurry up he's going, Ill get dad but he's going mad I'm gonna make him cross, if I don’t get an ice cream…YOUR LOSS!"
By Me and Georgia x
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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 October 2012 at 17:46

    what about your dounut one xxxxxxz

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  2. Anonymous2 October 2012 at 10:50

    haha thx 4 posting it leez! do u like it xxx

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  3. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:29

    haha very funny made me laugh

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  4. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:31

    This is so fuuunnnyyy!!! I really like this, because it rhymes allot and I like the end when it says 'YOUR LOSS'. Next time it would be nice to choose a darker color, because I think it would be easier to read.

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  5. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:34

    I like this because, it is funny, it rhymes,I was not bord when I read it! Next time chose darker colours, because it made my head hurt.

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  6. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:35

    i read your and it was fantastic my favorite part is i am gonna make him cross ice cream... YOUR LOSS !

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  7. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:39

    verry funny like it loads

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  8. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:41

    I think this is a rearlly good song.

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  9. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:42

    i love it so cool

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  10. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 11:45

    i really like your post i cant wait till you do some more

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  11. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 12:07

    I like your rap because it is very good

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  12. Anonymous3 October 2012 at 12:07

    I like your rap because it is very good

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