Friday 12 October 2012

peas poem

my mum called me for my tea i had chips and peas also nuggets and so i ate the nuggets i shouted because the  peas where touching the chips  
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  1. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:50

    I like this, because I don't like my peas touching my chips as it leaves a funny taste. I think you can improve by adding some punctuation.

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:01

    this is really good but i cant really read it sorry

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