Tuesday 16 October 2012

My poem for literacy

I suppose ive passed him a hundred times
But i always stop for a minute
Look at his head, the tragic head
The head with nobody in it
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 13:51

    Don't really get it so can you plz make more

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  2. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 13:55

    Good poem, and rhymes

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  3. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 13:57

    Funny and no problem at all

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  4. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:49

    i like it a lots keep it up

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  5. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:49

    i like this but i cant really read this and every thing else is ok

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  6. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:52

    This is a good poem.

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  7. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:01

    a bit short but apart from that its awsome

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  8. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:08

    nice poem but capital I and need a full stop.

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  9. Anonymous22 October 2012 at 17:00

    strange but i like it a lot

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