Sunday 14 October 2012

My Literacy Poem.

A candy bar

a piece of cake

a lollipop

a chocolate shake

a jelly doughnut

chocolate chips

some gummy worms

and liquorice whips

 a candy cane

 a lemon drop

 some bubblegum 

 and soda pop

 vanilla wafers

 cherry punch

 my mum slept in while i made my lunch.

 i hope u like it x
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 October 2012 at 15:45

    that is EPIC + IT'S FUNNY

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  2. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 13:56

    LOL! brilliant, all my favourite sweets and food

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  3. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 14:01

    Good and VERY FUNNY

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  4. Anonymous18 October 2012 at 14:04

    I want it for my lunch tomorrow

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  5. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:47

    I like it allot :)

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  6. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:53

    Hahahahaha.... Really funny. You could add some pictures of sweets.

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  7. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:57

    funny and yummy

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  8. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 13:58

    YUMMY! you have ,made me hungry i want of of these now, but i think you should change the colour so they look like different colour sweets!

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  9. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:02

    You'll get indigestion1

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  10. Anonymous19 October 2012 at 14:02

    You'll get indigestion!

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